I agree, it's really getting gratuitous now. I would have greatly preferred one tiny moment of "oh Ianto, I am so happy you are not exploded!" vs. "there, I popped your shoulder in, now hoof it," and some kind of hasty add-on in the Captain's Log later. I know that they couldn't have exactly started making out right then and there in the middle of the blast zone but still, just some tiny display of gratitude for Ianto's life-- just a touch more than he showed for the others'-- would have spoken volumes. This speaks basically nothing.

And it totally does sound like it's written by a teenage with all. The short. And emotional. Sentences.